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Alice Sledding Training by TreelifeDragon Alice Sledding Training by TreelifeDragon
This is Alice out in the snow training. It's snowing really badly and it's going to get really deep out here. She is doing good and she will be ready to join our advanced sledding team really soon. She has proved to be strong in the harness and has a lead dog attitude. She may take over as our new lead dog. :)
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This I am doing at school, plus I already gave you some sites so I'll just get to the point.

This is much better than your others. The muzzle (With is wear most, if not everyone have trouble on) It better. I reccomend doing a sketch first with it being a rectangle. The head being circle. And you gradually connect the two on the bottom (chin like thing) And you've done that well.
With the heat to nose part, you put a tip. Try to smooth that out next time.
The ears are curved too sharply whre the head seensto disappear behind it.

The neck you've done great on. You gradually moved to the shoulders.
Now, if you look up some other art with dogs, you can see their shoulder blades slightly. Those would be a bit higher. But don't put too much stress there, because they don't need to be that visable.
From the body to the leg, I think you can do that a little smoother, gradually. It's too rectangular. But youare getting that much better.
The little pary I can see of the belly is done just right! ^^
Good job on the picture, I think you've done really good ^^ You're getting there!!
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Bestestcat Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Reply to this, so I remember to help you later ^^
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TreelifeDragon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Reply xP
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Bestestcat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
there we go, I did it ^^ (in school)
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TreelifeDragon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks Kitty :3
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Bestestcat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
kitty XD lol. You are always welcome ^^

Sometimes, I'm afraid to offend you. But I don't ^^
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TreelifeDragon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Lol no critiques are always good and they're helping me improve. :)
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Bestestcat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, like this one-is one you've shown great improvement^^

>0< The one thing bugging me- Huge lines! ! XD

But sometimes they are best one some things ^^
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TreelifeDragon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
xD Yeah I always end up doing huge lines >.< Nuuuuu! xD

I mess it up with the huge lines but I do agree, at times they can make things better.
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